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A dream in the woods

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A dream in the woods

As we walk in the woods
we talk
he spoke his gental words
as we alk
we talked
as we reached the end of the woods
we sit by the fire
as we watched the flames
I turned and looked in his eyes
and saw it
i saw what i wanted
It wasn't him
it wasn't anything around     
it was someone to love
someone to really know me
Someone to care about
my existence
The person i longed for

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  1. Date: 5/29/2009 5:35:00 PM
    Touching poem! There a few errors in spelling - "gentle" and as "we walked". I particularly like the line - "Someone to card bout my existence". Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 4:19:00 AM
    this was very nice because it there was alot of feelings in it

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 6:54:00 PM
    true feeling. been here.

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 3:03:00 PM
    wow... some lovely of expressing your love. enjoyed poetry and have a great day.