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A Dove Lost Her Love

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A Dove Lost Her Love

A handsome face clouded with pain
My Beloved's gone, blood flowed down the drain
My fragile sensibility got shattered
And my heart got scattered!
Lost and lamenting, all alone
To cold and fright I became prone!

No more warm wishes and wet kisses
Only the pain, like the adder it hisses!
Cruel fate, hard life, no more tender
Oh What a sad way to end this wonder!
That handsome face, my eternal beloved
Your scent shall forever be coved!

Pray, Time, Run fast! Take me to that place,
There where my Beloved is waiting with grace!

05 June 2012

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  1. Date: 6/9/2012 9:04:00 AM
    This is a sorrowful write, Anoucheka. The couplet at the end gives it an aspect of finality. Think you that where they wait, they are promted to watch the clock in anticipation? Perhaps "grace" gives the sad stricken soul strength where love will persevere. Best wishes, Mikki

    Gangabissoon Avatar Anoucheka Gangabissoon
    Date: 6/9/2012 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    In fact, I meant it that he is dead.......:) there where he is waiting with grace is heaven!! :) Its just writing worries