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A Dolphin's Bliss

sounds of the ocean dance ... stripped choreography it's a dolphin's bliss

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 5:20:00 PM

I left you some soup mail...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/4/2009 10:44:00 AM

love it, hot poems list

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/30/2009 12:06:00 PM

Nice to see you have a hot poem Marco, congrats...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2009 1:03:00 PM

This rocks like the sea's waves, Marco! Indeed, the dolphin's have their own choreography and it's so much fun to watch them frolic as they dance atop the ocean. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 9/27/2009 10:41:00 PM

and what a bliss it is especially for this such creature, nice poem

Corinne Curcio

Date: 9/24/2009 9:07:00 AM

And our bliss to watch them, if we're so fortunate. Beautifully done

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/21/2009 7:46:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Pls re-entre: it's a dolphin's bliss...to count 5cyl. All the best.

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/20/2009 10:24:00 PM

Amazing imagery Marco...those first two lines grabbed me...Raul

Date: 9/20/2009 5:36:00 PM

Sea life has always fascinated me. Thanks for sharing this creative view. I really like the second line. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/20/2009 4:52:00 PM

Can see it dancing in the waves! :) nice writing!

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/20/2009 4:43:00 PM

A lovely visual.. dolphins are so graceful.......nice job!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2009 4:13:00 PM

Interesting idea here. Keep writing. Sara