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A Delicate Balance

Breathless and beguiled
 Nature blankets my lone dreams
   Swallowing me whole





Written by: Amber Plocica
For Mr. Moreno's Haiku contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:24:00 PM

AMBER, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Kira Price

Date: 4/2/2014 9:52:00 PM

Breath Taking!

Stephan McBride

Date: 7/23/2011 10:11:00 PM

wonderful

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/8/2009 9:43:00 AM

This is so good!!! Write more! Love to you. Dane Ann (soup mail)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/6/2009 1:08:00 PM

congratulations Amber..its a pity you're not writing anymore..you ve got talent--charma

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/6/2009 5:58:00 AM

This is excellent. The words are breath taking. I can see the imagery of the blanket. Great job! ~Joseph

Sara Lokken

Date: 8/10/2009 6:08:00 PM

You're not only eleven....no way!!!!!!!!! You write much better than I did at eleven... I saw your commenting on Rhinem's work. Little one, post more poems, because I wanna see them!:) Hugs, Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/10/2009 1:25:00 AM

Hi Amber, Congratulations on your honorable mention in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.

Sue Mason

Date: 8/6/2009 8:41:00 AM

Hope you return soon with lots more writing, Amber!

Shianna Metzgar

Date: 8/4/2009 9:13:00 AM

nice poem amber >>>shi im the same age as u read my poems too

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/3/2009 1:40:00 PM

Such a lovely and haunting haiku. It's brilliant!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/30/2009 7:11:00 AM

Awesome writing my friend...thanks for the comments.