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A day's solitude

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A day's solitude

Washed a load of clothes
And hung them out to be dried
And busied myself all day….
As I entered in
The sleeve of the shirt…
Rose in observance.

In a gust of wind
Night clothes twined and intertwined
The harvest moon being full…..
Sparse clouds made its light
The bed side flat as desert….
The pillow plump, cool fable.

August 18, 2014 (A Repost but never entered into any contest)
Form: Sedoka

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  1. Date: 9/8/2014 2:25:00 PM
    Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/6/2014 12:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Dr. Mehta. I can see the clothes blowing in the wind.

  1. Date: 9/6/2014 8:26:00 AM
    Congratulations, Dr. Ram on your fine win! Great imagery. Kika

  1. Date: 9/5/2014 10:02:00 PM
    Interesting, I love the way clothes dance on a line in the wind. I don't know this form, but your descriptions were great. Grats on your contest placing :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2014 5:35:00 PM
    Congratulations, DR RAM, 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 10:41:00 AM
    I can just see the night clothes twisting in the wind, missing their place on a soft bed, Dr. Ram. Another great sedoka! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 12:21:00 AM
    Good Sedoka doc. have a blissful day,much love~O.O.