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A Day's Solitude

Washed a load of clothes And hung them out to be dried And busied myself all day…. As I entered in The sleeve of the shirt… Rose in observance. In a gust of wind Night clothes twined and intertwined The harvest moon being full….. Sparse clouds made its light The bed side flat as desert…. The pillow plump, cool fable. ***** August 18, 2014 (A Repost but never entered into any contest) Form: Sedoka

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Date: 9/8/2014 2:25:00 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/6/2014 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Mehta. I can see the clothes blowing in the wind.
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Date: 9/6/2014 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram on your fine win! Great imagery. Kika
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Date: 9/5/2014 10:02:00 PM
Interesting, I love the way clothes dance on a line in the wind. I don't know this form, but your descriptions were great. Grats on your contest placing :)
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Date: 9/5/2014 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations, DR RAM, 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
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Date: 11/19/2011 10:41:00 AM
I can just see the night clothes twisting in the wind, missing their place on a soft bed, Dr. Ram. Another great sedoka! Love, carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2011 12:21:00 AM
Good Sedoka doc. have a blissful day,much love~O.O.
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