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A Day's Farewell

Deep shadows spread soft and gentle hands across the shore, along the strand Gulls soar above , while evening sighs with white wings against a crimson sky Day clings to the edge of the earth as a red sun slips into the surf

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2012 4:49:00 PM

Second couplet is spectacular. Congrad's on your win! Light & love

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/12/2012 3:30:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on your first place win!! It is like a masterful art. So beautiful, let me just sit and absorb every drop of this picturesque beauty. huggs, gautami

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/11/2012 5:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place line, Carrie!! Beautiful imagery! Blessings, Rhonda

J. Dover

Date: 4/11/2012 5:02:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Carrie! Congratulations on the win! Love, J.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/11/2012 4:05:00 PM

Beautiful poem! Congratulations on your first place win! White wings against a crimson sky is a lovely thing to imagine. Always, Laura

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/11/2012 2:26:00 PM

Awesome write.Congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/11/2012 1:18:00 PM

congrats Carrie on a perfect first place win luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2012 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/11/2012 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie...so well deserved my friend..breath-takingly picturesque!!! big huggs,love deb

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/22/2010 1:27:00 PM

That last line has such a basic beauty to it that it defies criticism or cliche. I wish I had written that line. This is soft and gentle. Much like you are, I suppose. Love, Gerard.

John Freeman

Date: 7/21/2010 12:10:00 PM

Beautiful /Crystalline, Carrie. Awesome writing, my Lady! Thanks for the "A" on my Sonnet, I don't get many votes of such magnitude, I just hope my Sponsor also sees it that way.A-Smile! Agape, Moses

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/21/2010 11:32:00 AM

lovely piece....TAH

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/21/2010 10:13:00 AM

Carrie, I sense another winner here. It's beautiful. I'm not familiar with this form so I need to read into it before I attempt it, but thanks for such a lovely example ~ Sharon :)