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A Day's Farewell

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A Day's Farewell

Deep shadows spread soft and gentle hands
   across the shore, along the strand

Gulls soar above , while evening sighs 
   with white wings against a crimson sky

Day clings to the edge of the earth
    as a red sun slips into the surf

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  1. Date: 4/12/2012 4:49:00 PM
    Second couplet is spectacular. Congrad's on your win! Light & love

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 3:30:00 AM
    Congrats Carrie on your first place win!! It is like a masterful art. So beautiful, let me just sit and absorb every drop of this picturesque beauty. huggs, gautami

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your first place line, Carrie!! Beautiful imagery! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:02:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, Carrie! Congratulations on the win! Love, J.

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Beautiful poem! Congratulations on your first place win! White wings against a crimson sky is a lovely thing to imagine. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 2:26:00 PM
    Awesome write.Congrats.

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:18:00 PM
    congrats Carrie on a perfect first place win luv..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 3:36:00 AM
    Congratulations well deserved my friend..breath-takingly picturesque!!! big huggs,love deb

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 1:27:00 PM
    That last line has such a basic beauty to it that it defies criticism or cliche. I wish I had written that line. This is soft and gentle. Much like you are, I suppose. Love, Gerard.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 12:10:00 PM
    Beautiful /Crystalline, Carrie. Awesome writing, my Lady! Thanks for the "A" on my Sonnet, I don't get many votes of such magnitude, I just hope my Sponsor also sees it that way.A-Smile! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 11:32:00 AM
    lovely piece....TAH

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 10:13:00 AM
    Carrie, I sense another winner here. It's beautiful. I'm not familiar with this form so I need to read into it before I attempt it, but thanks for such a lovely example ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 6:53:00 AM
    Wonderful images to A day's farewell. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 3:12:00 AM
    I can see a beautiful sunset here and magical reflection of a day's farewell.beautiful! C.C

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:17:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:10:00 PM
    love it, just beautiful, good luck in the contest