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A Day With Grandma

~~ I stood on the old wooden chair, my sweet old grandma, watching; I can still smell the red apples, and the pie dough we were rolling. We carefully put the pie in the oven, and sat at the kitchen table talking; We drank tea and told stories, in the living room grandpa was snoring. Later, grandma in her rocking chair, would soothe my head, gently stroking; I still remember she hummed a tune, and soon we would both be sleeping. ____________________________________ September 1, 2013 Quatrain Written by Broken Wings (Constance La France) For the contest, You're a Little Kid Again, Juli-Michelle Age in poem - 5 years old

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 8:51:00 AM
    What lovely picture you have painted.

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 4:11:00 AM
    Delightful. Thank you .

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 4:14:00 PM
    loved this, my friend - hope you are well and the kitties too. I sent your xmas gift a week or so ago and hope it will reach you soon, love from Jack x

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 2:36:00 AM
    Very beautiful.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:39:00 PM
    oh my this is so sweet. I racked my brain what to write for this contest and I could have entered if I had just thought of something so simply beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:56:00 AM
    soon we would both be sleeping....i can watch or imagine the moment you want to describe.I think this is common to almost all of you except me.Great job

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:46:00 PM
    beautiful write, my friend - I loved being with my gran too. Thanks very much - enjoyed the contest : )

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Nice memories of grandma impressively expressed

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 5:18:00 PM
    This is a beautiful write of memories of your youth! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! You have brought a smile on my face with this illustrious piece! What a glorious verse, Great Work!!