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A Day To Remember

I thirst for just a little sunshine
A wisp of warm air to stir me
I get another gray dreary day
Wind so cold it chills to the bone

I lift my hands up to the sky
Try to break through to the sun
I blow my breath into the wind
To warm it through and through

The end result I can now see
There isn't a thing I can do
This is the day God has sent
So I will enjoy the day I have

Entry for Brian's  Any Poem12 Line Max Contest
3rd Place Winner

Copyright © Carol Sunshine Brown

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  1. Date: 4/6/2014 4:27:00 PM
    Perfect. Absolutely fantastic. The Lord will be proud..

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 4:11:00 PM
    Hi Carol - Beautiful thoughts...beautifully worded. Enjoyed reading this. - Gail

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:15:00 PM
    BIG belated congrats for this win. It was well deserved.

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 10:24:00 AM
    Yes, every day is a gift from God. A lovely write, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 8:46:00 AM
    oh yea.. we gotto enjoy them... conrats on the win.....sashi

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 2:37:00 PM
    fav line [I get another gray dreary day/ Wind so cold it chills to the bone] the smattering of alliteration is lovely! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Very nice words - Congrats..........George

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:01:00 AM
    Indeed...beautifully written poem, Carol. Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
    Yes,you should enjoy it!Congratulations on your win,Carol.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 7:23:00 AM
    cheery smiles for your shimmering win, carol.. comgrats with huggs! :)

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:57:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:24:00 PM
    Congrats. Carol on your win, lovely poem, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Awesome write,Carol.It`s really a day to remember...Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this Contest...

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Carol, wonderful poem, wonderful message. I really enjoyed this fine work. Congrats on placing on Brian's winners' list........................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Congratulations Carol on your win with this beautiful poem.Thanks for your congratulatory messages at my pages.

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Congrats, Carol. Beautiful, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 10:18:00 AM
    congrats Carol on a marvelous win for these lovely words .. so beautiful my friend.. thankxx for all your sweet comments so encouraging to me luv..

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:47:00 AM
    Thank you Brian for the honor of placing in your contest. Thank you to everyone who has commented on this piece. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:05:00 PM
    You are hoping for spring. I'm in Florida hoping for a little chill. Yours is a great message, we should just be happy for the God given day no matter what the weather.Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:08:00 PM
    I really like this one and I think Brian should too. REALLY great poem, Carol.