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While cooking breakfast, saw the sun rise out my kitchen window..Torn between cooking and finishing breakfast or go to the porch to see the color display..Sara

A Cook

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Cook _
Ham
Sizzling,
Biscuits baked
Eggs boil, grits bubble
Sunrise casting magenta
Charcoal clouds that float in from Gulf of Mexico
Desire to write the sunrise down; trapped by duty, obligation, or is it pure love.

In honor of Brian Strand:
Show me/ don't tell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/25/2012 5:51:00 PM
Good example of show , don't tell!! Congrats in the contest, Sara.
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:11:00 AM
Is it just me, or can I really smell that ham? Congratulations Sara
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:45:00 AM
congrats Sara on HM with is exciting entry of poetic art.. lines of grand imagery.. thankxx will tell Ron..
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Date: 1/17/2012 12:16:00 PM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Sara. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:08:00 PM
I'm feeling hungry again, reading your work! Thanks for your help with the fox - I've posted something, LOL.
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:10:00 PM
Sara, I had to take a look at this one because I just submitted a fibonacci of my own. At the end, there can be some pretty long lines! Yours are well written. Good entry.
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Date: 1/14/2012 2:45:00 AM
oh, let it be pure love indeed! what a clever piece that somehow makes alot of sense! wonderful poem Sara. thank you for your visit and kind words.
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Date: 1/13/2012 10:55:00 PM
You sure come up with some interesting poems in different forms, Sara. So what inspired this one? Is it for the food contest? I really like how you added in feelings on writing at the end of it!
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:09:00 PM
Pure love is what it is, dear Sara! Beautiful Fibonacci. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:07:00 PM
this a feel-good piece , sara.. i can see my tummy bulding!... scrumpuous wrote.. winning huggs if for a contest! :) huggs!
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