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A Confession To a Bartender

A confession to the bartender The one with the drink in her hand The one who looks just like my bottle... A glass would do Or make it two So i can pour out my heart to you... So i can make my bitterness come through... You remind me of my lady The only difference is your are tenderness You never took my heart the way she did you never played me the way she did.... She was everything to me That's why i took her to where i would be Somewhere dark where no eyes can see Somewhere i could meet her again.... Somewhere she won't hurt me again..... My secrets i give to to you my bartender...... Secrets of a large dark heart.... CONTEST; confessions to a bartender by; Natalie :) The Rogue Rhymer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2012 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write! Lori
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Long Poem" contest Prince. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 4:54:00 AM
Quite interesting. Take care and stay safe, Jancark
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Date: 5/22/2012 10:21:00 PM
Prince, Congratulations with your awesome long long poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Good night ~*~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:13:00 PM
congrats on your win Prince
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:45:00 PM
Prince congrast on your win..david
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:46:00 PM
This reads like a true story...Hmmmm?
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Date: 10/30/2011 4:06:00 PM
wow, a very dark one. I like this!!!
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