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A Comment From Becca

Sweet Becca Lucas told me recently My silliness makes her roar Confided though, if given the choice Prefers my serious poems more My comfort zone has always been humour Find humour in almost all things A cockeyed look at this sad old world Every morning I'm ready to sing Till Becca confided, I was unaware My serious poems made a impact After all these years on this planet of ours In life, experienced most aspects Just chug along now in my own domain Hoping to improve the outcome So hearing a comment like Becca just made It made my old heartstrings hum Thank you Becca for your thoughtfulness © Jack Ellison 2013

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Carol Eastman

Date: 9/8/2013 4:57:00 PM

Dragon decided that if you can sing in the morning, then he will, too. More like caterwauling than singing... I made an emergency call to Miss Kitty Purffect to give him singing lessons... and to get him to tone his volume down... What a set of lungs he has... She decided to give him guitar lessons to redirect him... YES, he's REALLY that bad! She's going to teach him a few folk songs... so he can be like you... watch out! Competition is on the way! NOT!... I've heard him... Tone deaf!... LOL

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/7/2013 1:21:00 PM

I agree with Becca...you have several serious ones that are just lovely! Everyone has their genre to write it...WE NEED YOUR HUMOR, JACK! Please...don't change! Lovely poem in tribute of Becca. She has the gift of encouragement! Hey...I will NOT HAVE YOU CALL YOURSELF AN OLD GEEZER!!! Go back and read my answer to your post on Passion Unfurled! HUGS

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/7/2013 6:39:00 AM

As you know already, I've always been a fan of your humor, but I can see Becca's point, your serious poetry has a certain tug on the heartstrings! However that being said, I still prefer your humor Jack, might be because you are so naturally awesome at it, you are a humorous person by nature my friend! This is so a tenderhearted dedication to Becca, I loved reading this tremendous poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/7/2013 7:20:00 AM

Your comments are always so kind and uplifting my friend! Thank you once again, Russell! Have a great day!

Wayland Bunch

Date: 9/7/2013 6:06:00 AM

Well I like all of your "QUATRAINS" hahaha, just kidding I like all of your poems including this wonderful dedication. You are all heart whether serious or funny and it shows in your poetry. Great work. You are a saint, Saint Nick jajajaja.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/7/2013 7:18:00 AM

Jolly Old Saint Nick here! Thank you my friend for your very kind words! Best wishes from "The Quatrain King!"