Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

A Comment From Becca

Jack Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison - LIFETIME Premium Member Jack Ellison - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A Comment From Becca which was written by poet Jack Ellison. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Jack Ellison

Best Jack Ellison Poems

+ Fav Poet

A Comment From Becca

Sweet Becca Lucas told me recently My silliness makes her roar Confided though, if given the choice Prefers my serious poems more My comfort zone has always been humour Find humour in almost all things A cockeyed look at this sad old world Every morning I'm ready to sing Till Becca confided, I was unaware My serious poems made a impact After all these years on this planet of ours In life, experienced most aspects Just chug along now in my own domain Hoping to improve the outcome So hearing a comment like Becca just made It made my old heartstrings hum Thank you Becca for your thoughtfulness © Jack Ellison 2013

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:57:00 PM
    Dragon decided that if you can sing in the morning, then he will, too. More like caterwauling than singing... I made an emergency call to Miss Kitty Purffect to give him singing lessons... and to get him to tone his volume down... What a set of lungs he has... She decided to give him guitar lessons to redirect him... YES, he's REALLY that bad! She's going to teach him a few folk songs... so he can be like you... watch out! Competition is on the way! NOT!... I've heard him... Tone deaf!... LOL

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 1:21:00 PM
    I agree with have several serious ones that are just lovely! Everyone has their genre to write it...WE NEED YOUR HUMOR, JACK! Please...don't change! Lovely poem in tribute of Becca. She has the gift of encouragement! Hey...I will NOT HAVE YOU CALL YOURSELF AN OLD GEEZER!!! Go back and read my answer to your post on Passion Unfurled! HUGS

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:39:00 AM
    As you know already, I've always been a fan of your humor, but I can see Becca's point, your serious poetry has a certain tug on the heartstrings! However that being said, I still prefer your humor Jack, might be because you are so naturally awesome at it, you are a humorous person by nature my friend! This is so a tenderhearted dedication to Becca, I loved reading this tremendous poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/7/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comments are always so kind and uplifting my friend! Thank you once again, Russell! Have a great day!
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:06:00 AM
    Well I like all of your "QUATRAINS" hahaha, just kidding I like all of your poems including this wonderful dedication. You are all heart whether serious or funny and it shows in your poetry. Great work. You are a saint, Saint Nick jajajaja.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/7/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jolly Old Saint Nick here! Thank you my friend for your very kind words! Best wishes from "The Quatrain King!"