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A Cloudy Day into Night

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A Cloudy Day into Night

As the day slowly fades, turning out the lights
Laying on a "pillow" the sky beckons the night.

A long day it was, hovering over the land.
Time to trade places and enter into dreamland.

The earth whispers goodnight, carried out by the wind..
The day turns into night, as the darkness slowly descends.

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  1. Date: 11/12/2010 12:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Erin. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 11:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured on homepage this week..It was a very calm and peaceful write that would just what is needed to end the day...Sara

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 9:06:00 AM
    very pretty poem, congrats on having it featured this week

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 6:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Erin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 9:23:00 AM
    Very nice-I loved it!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 9:13:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 8:52:00 AM
    very good write and this is exactly how it feels when you have a great "sleepy day"