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A Circle of Promises

Resting upon my outstretched hand lies what was once a circle of promises never ending given as a symbol of love spoken and unspoken now just a circle of heartache(s) this too never ending... or so it seems. Two people, once possessed of this band vowed for eternity to travel together as one a promise soon broken rendering forever one again into two. That which long ago radiated a warmth felt only by those it encircled its luster now dulled by time lies cold upon my hand with only my memories to hold it there. I wrap it once more within tissue yellowed by time and return it to my box of gone but not forgotten memories.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/22/2012 7:56:00 PM
Love this poem,hits me in the heart.going through a separation with the person who I thought I would live my life with and oh how I miss her,thanks for the write,my love for her will never die.Again thanks and thanks for the comment on my featured poem.
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Date: 6/12/2009 9:23:00 AM
Memories, one thing no one can take, good or bad, well written Melody>James
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Date: 4/1/2009 1:08:00 PM
Whoa!!! I know a lot of people that would love and understand this poem, including myself. I think it's so good because it tells of unending heartache without a trace of anger. Great write! And sooooo TRUE
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