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"a Child's Cry"

The fight goes on an endless roar
It tears me apart.  Digs deep to the core

In the fight these people don't see 
the saddening harm they are doing to me

I love them, they seem not to care
Where is the love?  It is not there

I feel so bare

I wish they would stop their trivial fights
that are converted to a mess and taken to flight

I feel so empty.  It seems so cold
I must be brave and keep a strong hold

For now I live in the love not seen
hoping soon to understand what it all means

I know some day there will be a solution
but scars grow deep and my soul's of polution

How long must I face a problem not mine?
I'm hoping for a day when love is devine

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kimberly. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 8/8/2010 8:26:00 PM

congrats on being featured this week, this piece is very deserving, painfully beautiful, powerful, and inspiring. keep holding on, even tunnels end in light. this was a great piece. welcome to soup. much love, madison.

Chrissy Downing

Date: 7/4/2010 2:34:00 AM

Wow intense. I can relate to this on so many levels it is sad. You have a gift. :) Love, Chrisssy

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/3/2010 8:05:00 PM

you can put it down as a ryhme. I like this poem, it has deep feelings. You hooked me now you have to write more. Welcome to Soup.

Kimberly Palhegyi

Date: 7/3/2010 4:19:00 PM

This was written when I was 16. I won't tell you how long ago that was :) Just learning this site. It's a great place for my work and to actually learn what style I write in. Any help with interpreting my style would be greatly appreciated.