A Childs Concept

There was a little girl 
barely more than three.
She went for a ride
to the country one Sunday
with her family.

She laughed and laughed
with glee
at all the animals
that she could see.

Then she spotted
something that before
She had not seen.

Now from the back seat
came the cry
UTS DAT  MOMMIE !!
UTS DAT !

There in the field was 
a tractor and a wagon.
Her mother told her what 
it was and all fell quiet.

Being that it was about nap time
and she was quiet for so long
they thought her asleep.

Suddenly     
a cry rang out 
from the back seat.

aaahh !!!  A Twagon !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/30/2012 11:57:00 PM
Haha...lovely poem Terry.Enjoyed very much.
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 12:10:00 AM
Thanks Kash nice to have you drop by. May a thousand smiles knock at your door. TLee
Date: 4/30/2012 11:32:00 PM
hehe...very cute, Terry...nicely written. children are awesome inspirations!
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 12:19:00 AM
Hey Tony thanks for the review but I bet you would enjoy " Betsy Was a Good Old Sport" or "An Evening By The Lake" or even "Awe Shucks" more than this poem about children unless you have kids of your own.
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