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A Change of Seasons - Haiku 2

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                                          crying a river of tears
                                             for winter is gone

                                                        ~~~~~

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James Fraser

Date: 3/25/2011 9:22:00 AM

Fine captures of winters end Elaine, nice one. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/4/2010 6:51:00 AM

Oh my heart. What a beautiful tribute Lainie. Your writing is always above and beyond. Thanks for stopping by and saying hello. Was trying to get back here, but it has changed so much. I will keep my eye open here, but for now, think I will remain an observer, whenever I can. It is so good to read and hear from an old friend. It is friends like you who draw me back here. All the best. Love & hugs, shar xoxo

Marie Harrison

Date: 7/5/2010 4:50:00 PM

Beautiful poem, brought tears to my eyes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2010 7:15:00 PM

Hey, Lainie, this is so nice. Did you know about etheree before I had that contest at Soup, or is this a new form for you? You do it very well!! Luv,Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 6/22/2010 4:50:00 AM

Lainie. I'm so busy trying to find an agent for my novel I probably forgot about your e-mail. At any rate, I'm so glad you enjoyed the book and thanks a million for reading it. Love, Dave

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/21/2010 2:49:00 PM

kinship is the best thing God made. john

Daver Austin

Date: 6/21/2010 2:46:00 PM

Beautiful. Tender. A great Etheree. I just got a reply for my book, "Sitter." I'll see what develops after the agent reads the first chapter. Did you ever get my book, "Nine From Cremona?" Love, Dave

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/21/2010 9:14:00 AM

This is such a precious Etheree poem. It flows so well and has a loving touch of embrace. It reminds me of my dear and sweet grandmother also. Great job! Joseph

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/20/2010 6:29:00 PM

Laine I had a very special grandmother and you are so right the power of love lasts a lifetime. Tears still come when I think of this precious, gracious lady, my grandma. Wonderful memories. God Bless Phyl

Date: 6/20/2010 5:30:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this one. Nice dedication to your grandmother. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen