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A Chance To Dance

Every sunrise as I sit on my porch with my coffee I’m constantly thinking about this fine and beautiful lady Pondering if she’ll ever be with me Because that’s one thing I can’t foresee Thinking on ways on how to talk to her Lands me on asking advice from my father He said, just tell her she’s like no other And that love is the only entity you can offer I cleared my throat and spoke to you If I mess this up, I know I can’t undo I had butterflies in my stomach, that’s so true But then again I just wanted you to know that I love you And under the night sky and beautiful stars We yakked and yakked for hours And I was wondering if the time was already ours Or would it just leave me with just another scar Nevertheless, I’m indomitable enough to win your heart And I can’t stand, you and I apart And pardon me if I’m going to fast But you’re the one that makes my heart beat I didn’t want the day to end And no more, I will pretend Hoping that you and I will be more than friends And I hope this feeling transcends So, fine lady, give me your hand and let’s dance And give this feeling a chance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/13/2024 11:15:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 8:54:00 PM
Vin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:58:00 PM
Vin L, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 9/7/2012 2:48:00 AM
Lovely poem Vin! Nice build up and delivery!
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:10:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Lauren. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 09/04/2012
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Date: 9/1/2012 9:54:00 PM
wonderfully written my friend..congrats and have a nice day!!
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