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A Burning Flame

I see a burning flame in your eyes and when you look at me that way I begin to feel like the whole world is spinning and we are at a distance So far apart like the sun, the moon and the stars Then I feel a burning flame Quenching my entire soul Starting with the middle of my heart When you lean in and kiss me with your soft sweet honey tasting lips I just become a burning flame so quick When you move like that And make me feel like this Oh an nothing can feed this desire This craving is just to strong Because you make me burn like a rapid fire Leaving me forever untamed as you just keep Turning me in to a burning flame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/8/2012 7:10:00 PM
hi jane just want you to know i think your (burning flame) is great softly erotic.nice job
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Jane Kostman
Date: 11/9/2012 6:34:00 AM
Thank you for you oh so sweet comments on m poem burning flame. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Don't be a stranger, Sincerely Jane

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