A Burning Flame

I see a burning flame in your eyes and when you look at me that way
I begin to feel like the whole world is spinning and we are at a distance 
So far apart like the sun, the moon and the stars
Then I feel a burning flame 
Quenching my entire soul
Starting with the middle of my heart 
When you lean in and kiss me with your soft sweet honey tasting lips
I just become a burning flame so quick
When you move like that
And make me feel like this 
Oh an nothing can feed this desire 
This craving is just to strong
Because you make me burn like a rapid fire
Leaving me forever untamed as you just keep
Turning me in to a burning flame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/8/2012 7:10:00 PM
hi jane just want you to know i think your (burning flame) is great softly erotic.nice job
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Jane Kostman
Date: 11/9/2012 6:34:00 AM
Thank you for you oh so sweet comments on m poem burning flame. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Don't be a stranger, Sincerely Jane
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