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A Blinded Vision

What happened to days when the dead were in graves and the youth gave respect to those over their age,when books were writting on page and no people were slaves, to a goverment made to portray those we left in dismay,the soldiers bleeding for days and fighting for a lost cause, sent into battle to solve the lost wars, we used them for chores and abandoned their crys, now we just watch as all the light dies, countries are falling as blood gets spilt, the leaves of great nations soon start to wilt, with each murder of innocence we condem our souls, we leave open our minds but bury our hearts within holes, so the torture and bloodshed remains unseen, to the kindness and caring of each human being, will this madness stop before theres nothing left, sure freedoms great but is it worth all the death, cant we have peace instead of peices everywhere, just look to the sky and smell the hatred in the air.

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  1. Date: 2/16/2012 8:18:00 AM
    I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Shannon. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you and I will stop by again to read your poems. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 6:49:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shannon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol