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A Blanket of stardust

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A Blanket of stardust

The sunset dazzles with its raspberry hue
And dances the Samba upon stirring waves
That copy from the skies’ patches of midnight blue
While warm winds of late summer caress my face

The noise and crowd thins and the world is now ours
Even tireless seagulls retire as further south we sail
Onward to the quiet cove where we’d play for hours
Anticipating no intrusions, birthday suits will prevail

Far away are mundane cares, left to another world
No room here for worries; all are tossed overboard
A weekend of devotion when only love unfurls
Is a special time of bonding, always on overload

Two hearts beating madly, as persistent love calls
Entwined, we lie beneath the low hung, yellow moon
While in the hush, soft sighs escape as gently waves fall
And a blanket of stardust burst above, as we spoon!

By:  Annalise
For Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" Contest

Copyright © Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Wonderful and excellent write,my dear friend..Intriguing piece...I love this...It deserves the number one place...Kudos to you...XOXO...

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 3:09:00 PM
    For me this was a definite number one ;) lovely content rythm and meter. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 5:01:00 AM
    Lovely and passionate write. Congrats with the win!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 7:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on your lovely poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Very lovely poem and congrats to your win, Annalise. (^_^).

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:26:00 AM
    My dear poet !! What a beautiful scene you have penned here...makes me long to have someone to spoon with !! Congrats on your worthy win !!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 2:30:00 AM
    Congratulations Annalise luv xx

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:14:00 PM
    Annalise. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Great imagery and beautifully written. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:37:00 PM
    good luck in the contest xoxo pd

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 12:26:00 PM
    Wow! A gorgeous poem. A sure winner in the Contest. Thanks for visiting my poem Rain, Annalise. I wish you a very happy, productive and prosperous New Year. Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:48:00 PM
    Love how the poem climaxes in the last stanza. This poem beautifully serenades nature and human nature. Loved it!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:45:00 PM
    wow, I love how you made it so romantic. COOL way to go with that theme. Loved the first two lines. the sun dancing samba is so fresh!!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 7:07:00 PM
    A beautiful romantic poem here!Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 3:16:00 PM
    Just beautiful Annalise! Best wishes for the,Deb