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A Blanket of Stardust

“Stardust is falling!” I heard my son cry, his small precious face looking up at the sky. “Stardust?” I echoed, and thought how my son had such a vivid imagination. “Yes, Mommy. Look!” he said, taking my hand. He led me outside; the sky I then scanned. I felt an enchantment, for what did I see? Myriads of stars shone down brightly at me. And the harder I stared, the more that it seemed the heaven above was like something we dreamed. The sky was a forest, and each star - a tree - was blazing in splendor against ebony. A celestial wildfire spread there overhead. “See, Mommy, see?” my dear child then said. No dust falling down from those stars did I see, but his eyes now looked downward ecstatically. When I followed his gaze, my shock was so sweet. A blanket of stardust I found at our feet!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/8/2017 9:31:00 PM
I somehow missed this wonderful poem written in 2012. This is so beautiful Andrea I just love it! : )
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Date: 7/6/2016 7:19:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this colorful, serene, enchanting piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/5/2016 3:26:00 PM
What a sweet poem this is Andrea ! I'm so glad your Stardust could shine again !!! :)
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Date: 7/5/2016 11:30:00 AM
This is fantastic. I love the imagery Andrea but most as it is from the angle of a your son! :D Kids are great! Congrats.
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Date: 7/4/2016 10:07:00 PM
Andrea, I had marked your poem in 4th place in my contest. I don't know why the results came out the way they did... Happy 4th and Congratulations... check out my blog if you like. LINDA
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Date: 7/4/2016 9:27:00 PM
So sweet Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/4/2016 9:04:00 PM
This is beautiful.....something that I would like to see....Congratulations on your contest win
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Date: 4/28/2015 12:46:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Lovely write, magical, as seen through a child's eyes. Congrats on your fine win. // Not back, yet, just visiting old friends:) All the best. // paul
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:06:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/24/2015 7:55:00 AM
This is so beautiful, what imagery.
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Date: 4/21/2015 6:56:00 AM
This is so very beautiful...congratulations on win
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Date: 4/20/2015 3:15:00 PM
Simply beautiful was the name of the contest;;;;;and indeed perfect name for this poem ! Through a child's eyes, the world is a beautiful place! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:43:00 PM
Lovely and sweet, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea- Congrats. Hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/19/2015 7:31:00 PM
I love this one....Congrats on your win Andrea...
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea; I love this poem. Made me think of the things my son would say when he was a little boy.
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:46:00 PM
So magical, whimsical and beautiful is this poem. Nicely done, Andrea! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 4/19/2015 6:04:00 PM
absolutely enchanting Andrea - beauty through the eyes of a child - a 7 from me and congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2014 10:05:00 AM
And wern't you just the person to find it Andrea...and no I'm not back yet, L O L just looking in, great to read and congrats Joe..'
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Date: 12/28/2013 6:50:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,Andrea
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Date: 12/27/2013 8:06:00 AM
First I must say that this is a very good poem. A well deserved win Andrea, I enjoyed this one...Hugs....Roger
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:46:00 AM
Hi Andrea, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox..Linda
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Date: 1/25/2013 4:05:00 PM
Lovely and Beautiful write,Andrea...Congrats on your win..Kudos to you,dear friend..
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:05:00 PM
A unique and personal take Andie. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2013 6:47:00 PM
I love this one Andrea. My son too up[ until the day he died was enchanted with the stars and planets. Love, Joyce
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