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A Bizzare Wooden Car

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A Bizzare Wooden Car

There was an old man
Who smoked a cigar.
He sped across the country
In an old wooden car.
He drove to the markets, 
Known as "Number One Star".
He devoured so much fruit
That he couldn't drive far.
Got stuck in an outhouse 
Had to leave the door ajar;
He couldn't trust anyone
With his old wooden car.
He noticed a grizzly bear
Standing off, not that far.
Quickly he commanded.
"Hey, Don't touch that car!"
The grizzly bear gave a growl
With his nose to the stars.
He chased the old man 
And they both forgot the car.

Bob, the car must have came from an antique shop.

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  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:11:00 PM
    You have a very unique style. Reminds me a bit of Dr. Seuss, but for adults!!!

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 9:43:00 AM
    Really amusing, what a great write well done you

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 9:00:00 PM
    Just like fiberglass, wood can burn. So a fire extinguisher must have been standard equipment on this model. Good entertaining write here.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:45:00 AM
    very amusing tale you have spun here

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 7:03:00 AM
    Good one Peggy.....:) :) :)....... - Always fun to read happy poems...(there are so many sad one) - Have a lovely and happy day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 5:24:00 PM
    Got a chuckle out of this one..Great work..The story in poetic form was captivating..Sara

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 3:23:00 PM
    so funny Peggy...nice one...always...Joseph

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 6:06:00 PM
    Sorry for the typo

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Dear Peggy this is a very amusing story, I really like it a lot . Made me chuckle just a little. Kind of intense ' I kinda feel sorry for the poor old man who left his wooden car behind . You know what's amazing about poetry the way you can make any image happen...thank you for sharing your wonderful poemail...pd

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 9:45:00 PM
    Oh I love this,,, I'm eating watermelon just now,,,, have a blessed day

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:38:00 PM
    This so much fun xx

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:11:00 PM
    Great creative write Peggy, enjoyed your verse, luv vie

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 6:10:00 PM
    A fun romp, Peggy! A jaunty flow and fine rhyming... I wonder if he came back for his car, or if he ended up in the bear's belly! Well done!! Best wishes, Keith :)

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    Date: 6/28/2012 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i think he may have become the bears fine dinner. Thanks for your comments.