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A Bitter Taste

My father's caresses. Once I yearned for some sign of love but now I only look at him as incapable. I understand now, and I let go. My mother's kisses. I eagerly took them when I was looking for love but I took the dominance, too. Now the kisses and the lack of caresses leave me with a bitter taste. I no longer want that kind of love. I am my own love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/14/2014 9:08:00 AM
Sounds like you and I have much in common. As I was reading this well constructed poem, Don, I found myself nodding my head with wonder. Yes to incapable love, and yesss! to love, i.e., dominance.
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Date: 11/25/2012 9:47:00 AM
Welcome back after a long absence! A very honest write about the longing for signs of love! Well written with much emotion... Jack
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Date: 11/24/2012 12:00:00 PM
It was not normal that we as kids saw that my mother and father were loving with each other .... no hug ..... no kiss on the cheek .... - A "second generation" - My mother "learned" to show love when she was old - My father "hate" to get a hug. - Touching poem and it is well written Don. - Have a great and relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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