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A beautiful thought

The life that flows untied,
The self that grows inside,
The beauty that we search in other's eyes,
Its all present deep inside.

          I see myself in you,
          In these fleeting moments, I see the truth.
          When I hurt you,  I hurt myself too.
          In love with you, as I begin to see, 
          I set my spirit free.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2010 7:55:00 PM
    Great insight here, Girish! Similar thoughts in my "What Defines Us"... read it when you have the time. If only people will remember this, there will be no violence, no war, no poverty! A perfect world...but that's not going to happen..not yet. I am very optimistic though, one day..don't know when, but one day it will come. Take care my friend. And God bless you where ever you are!!! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 4:59:00 PM
    Extraordinary write, Girish!!!! Are you writing down those thoughts, my little brother? Hope so. This is truly a beautiful one! Thanks for sharing it. Peace to you, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/19/2009 5:18:00 AM
    Excellent rhyming and sublime content... as Sting sang '...if you love somebody, set them free.' BRAVO Girish! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/7/2009 10:45:00 AM
    One Word Girish. Brilliant!!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 7:29:00 AM
    so gently yhou have told the truth... loved how quietly the words flowed so well... so much passion in this write!! great job... ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 7:00:00 AM
    very good write, It's true when we hurt the one's we love we hurt too

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 5:36:00 AM
    There is much truth in your words. They flow smoothly and speak clearly of the completion of one when in love with another. Michael