" Songs of a Poetic Heart "

Hello POETESS’ and POETS as My Host would Say I’ve been asked to Speak in His Stead :Take it as YOU May Do YOU Remember when Last YOUR Heart Fluttered in LOVE When I was Young ; I can recall pulsating , to a Ever Perfect Life Her Green Eyes : “ Kryptonite “ to ME HER Superman The Portrait in HER Eyes , as mine ; is a reflection of Her Agape LOVE TO BE COTINUED : MAYBE

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/16/2010 2:48:00 PM

a green eyed lover now that's rare! Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/10/2010 10:17:00 PM

A beautiful tribute to your dear heart, HG! You were her Superman!! Peace, love, Audrey

Date: 2/28/2010 5:33:00 PM

Your eternal love shines in this one. Interesting ending--my guess is that this will be continued. Keep on writing! Karen

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/28/2010 5:01:00 PM

Her Superman. that is cute. portrait in her eyes. So Beautiful. you describe clearly how amazing her soul is through her eyes. continue, for yourself & Lenore(: -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/28/2010 12:26:00 PM

She must have been beautiful,and now she is an angel,more beautiful than ever:)..Agapae is your love,still living and vivid..wonderful..cont...Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 10:02:00 AM

I know you wrote this for Lenore, HG, and it's such a heartfelt poem. Very creative the way you used "kryptonite" to describe the power behind her green eyes. Well done, my friend! Love, carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 5:54:00 AM

I enjoyed that