~ Cinderella ~

Glancing up for a moment

From within the parties crowd

The first time, that I had ever beheld

Her alluring blue eyes, azure

When everything stood still....

Frozen, in slow motion

As they all disappeared

A meeting of destinies paths

That were always meant to be

Brought together, for all, of eternity

Encased in a dream....

That would spell our lives

With no words which were spoken

These souls, that had touched

Passing the spectrums, of space and life

A love that was born

Long, before there was light....

Fate had brought her smile

As I gazed upon her glowing face

Yet never had I known

Such a wonder as this place 

Silence had fallen....

Upon this Halloweens night 

For so beautiful she was

Pretty, with her painted whiskers

Adorned, as a precious kitty cat

And I as a prince

Who was dressed in red

Taking the flower, from upon my vest

As I slowly glided across the room

It was my heart, that I held, within my hand

My soul....

While I breathed, inside her breath

Of tomorrows forever, I knew

When I first touched her hand

A kiss that had waited

For a thousand years....

Igniting, a prism of colors

Amid a now, fading, and colorless crowd

The night, when time stood still

For a young man, who had finally found

........His........

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    
~ Cinderella ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 7/15/2009 4:33:00 PM
i reread this write and it leads me to the next write"your fair maiden'-do you dare dream Cindirella AGAIN--STEPS OF LIVE--POETRY FOLLOWS--BEAUTIFUL DREAM--CHARMA
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Date: 7/7/2009 11:26:00 AM
bEAUTIFUL WRITE cindirella and the prince coming to live--azure eyed Cindirella,is it the woman once close to your heart?or am i mislead?is it the queen of the house?beautiful love poem and if it is for that woman,i must say how you describe her to angel of times-beautiful,it goes to my favs. John in love with a Cindirella=--awesome--charma:)
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Date: 1/29/2009 3:00:00 PM
wow this awesome!...soo sweet and great flow as well....thanx for your sweet comments on my poem"Blind Love"..great job!...*/*/*/*Maryam
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Date: 11/18/2008 7:53:00 AM
Dear John, this is such a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. I am starting to come into the light again after the many days of darkness that my depression brings, at times. I tend to forget that there is still beauty in this world to discover and behold. I thought these passages would be appropriate: Sons 1:2 & 1 Cor 13. With love, Robin
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Date: 11/10/2008 8:21:00 AM
awww this is so sweet, thank for your feed back on my recent posts, God bless you from diane,
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:57:00 AM
On dear John, this is completely mesmerizing. So much love inside!! You have certainly intoxicated me with this write:) Though I'm not sure I ever had such a feeling yet I felt it fully. Magical love swims across!! Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:43:00 AM
Oh, be still my beating heart! This was so beautiful!!! I know that feeling and have written it's truth before, of meeting someone for the first time, yet knowing you have known them for all eternity - nothing quite like that, is there? Well done! Love Kristin
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Date: 11/10/2008 12:35:00 AM
She sounds captivating, the imagery of this halloween ball is magical, I am very happy to have been introduced. Hello my friend, thank you for your very kind words, I hope we develop this friendship further as time moves along, blessings and Love to you and yours, Julie x
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Date: 11/9/2008 5:15:00 PM
John this is so loving and beautiful. Some day I hope to have that experience that you so perfectly described. Love this write. What a magical moment one that I long for. God bless you and your's Michael Torres
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:06:00 PM
Wow, If I ever got a tribute like this I would fall over. Just wonderful..I m glad you found "yours"..BG
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Date: 11/9/2008 3:53:00 PM
This is so amazing. I felt as if I was there watching as I read each line. Beautiful, Always, Christy
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Date: 11/9/2008 2:45:00 PM
Read my new poems and tell me what you think
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