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   I breathe the summer air with a clear mind
    The riverside breeze gives blissful respite 
      But looking over my shoulder I can see
          My callous old self grinning wildly
            I can't evade his determination         
              He won't relent in the least
                 He will never back down
                     Until his mistakes
                        Are repeated 

                     By Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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  1. Date: 9/30/2011 7:58:00 AM
    Ah, the mistakes: but isn't that what gives us things to write about? Sometimes I think being human is a mistake. Love your poem Kyle, it probes a deeper thought.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 6:14:00 PM
    loved it! you presented well with simple words the hidden side that keeps lurking in your mind. thanks for stopping by :D

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 6:07:00 PM
    The mischievous you sounds like an interesting fella. Innovative shaping here. Nice one, Kyle. :))

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:54:00 AM
    wish i could write as good as you :P . you always find the right words to express yourself :) . love the look of this aswell.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 1:08:00 AM
    Cool shape poem! Interesting reflections on the the ever present ego. - Best, Karen