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6 months and counting

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6 months and counting

im writing this early to tell you how i feel

on June 28th will declare the love we have for eachother for half a year

it will be a reminder that you chose me to be your significant other,

your other half, the one you trusted to take care of you and your heart =)

the moment we "officially" met it was fun and alil hurtful (insider *hockey*)

also the day that we kissed was magical (no lie it gave me chills)

and the day we became official it was like a happy ending to a fairytale

but it was our begining our start to something wonderful =)

im grateful to have you as  part of  my life

i treasure every moment we share together, every kiss we make,

all the laughs we share, and so much more

i appreciate all of the patience and understanding you have

and im forever grateful for you putting up with me cause i know i can be difficult,

my friends cause they are just insanely wierd, and my family...

I LOVE YOU!!!! i love you will all of my heart and so much more 

no mere words can truly define how i feel for you so i hope that my actions

as your girlfriend will define it for me =)

well im going to end this by saying that as long as you want me by yourside,

i will continue to care for you and cherish your heart,

i will continue to be there for you whenever possible,

and i will continue to be all that you need and more

                 

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  1. Date: 7/12/2011 11:13:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen onto the paper from which you posted your excellent poetry today Fantise. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 9:09:00 PM
    Sounds like someone has some emotions they need to get out to someone...I know how it is. =)