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3 Tankas On Honey

Like a Hungry Bear I approach the Honey Jar Slurping the Sweetness Pearls of sticky glue dripping Fast I Lick my lustful lips Now the jar's empty I Scoop the Delicious Dew My restless fingers Rushing to work honestly Leaving not a drop to wipe My taste buds do speak Savor the lingering last Reaching the zenith Grateful to flowers and bees My blissful heart blesses them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/25/2013 5:33:00 AM
WOW! I really like this! I'm hopeless with Tankas, but you seem to have gotten it right. I'm not an expert. Harry Horseman is! Hope he reads this!
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Sima Mittal
Date: 4/25/2013 8:16:00 AM
thanks Eileen! I've also enjoyed a lot of your fun poems.....
Date: 4/25/2013 2:33:00 AM
My first shot at TANKAS.....hopefully got them right.....
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