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3 Equals One

You would think they are all the one and same Me, myself and I - intertwined Its all in here, different parts co exist Influence this mind three egos persist At times a battle here to be won Thoughts and emotions going round the twist Three equals one at times hard to control Confusion, decisions they are all involved Although different but all part of one I couldnt imagine life any other way Three different perspectives weight divided I assure you not equally, then decided Sometimes I lose to myself and I But me is who I am and that's just fine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/30/2012 11:57:00 PM
I can't believe I didn't comment on this? I read it already a while back? Loved it then,loved it now! :o)
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Date: 11/9/2012 4:06:00 AM
Hi Shaz, I'm through posting for awhile and will now be commenting. Getting to know my way around the site and hope to contribute more later. I love this poem. It's written from a great perspective and truth is in the conclusion. Thanks for all your comments on my posts.....Jake
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:53:00 PM
hI Shaz, I'm sitting here waiting for, you to finish that poem from 5 days ago... he he kidding.. My fiance, has poems from 15 years ago that he's now just finishing. I ask him why once, he said~ "the longer they sit,' THE MORE QUALITY IT WILL GET ONCE HE DECIDES TO OPEN HIS MIND TO THAT POEM AGAIN." HE HE HE~ like a wine bottle the longer it sits, the better the taste. By the way,, i had a chuckle with the reality of your poem. I mean that in a good way.. congrats with your featured poem of the week..pd
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Date: 6/3/2012 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on feature...Patrick
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem of the week!!! Hugs
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Date: 5/29/2012 4:38:00 AM
Thank you for letting me know! I had no idea :)
Date: 5/28/2012 7:13:00 AM
Nice introspective Shaz!.....jimbo
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Date: 5/27/2012 10:29:00 PM
hmmmmm....that's good. very wonderful. tight juxtaposition.
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Date: 5/20/2012 11:15:00 AM
Interesting poem written here..welcome to poetry soup!!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 5/20/2012 4:37:00 AM
Shaz, welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will have fun here and write, read and comments back alot of poem - You do it so well...like your poem. - Sending you hello from Norway and Anne-Lise
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