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30 Minutes

*****30 minutes*****
When I see or feel something sad 
I hear the sound of your steps
When you were moving away from me 
After those 30 sweet emotional minutes 
That we spent by playing in the paradise of love
How can I forget those 30 minutes 
Which change the vision of my heart 
How can I erase your picture from my head
Next to those princesses who deserve my love
My heart is locked behind bars in your jail
Oh, in my bedroom, I feel so good as sad
The magic of those sacred 30 minutes happened there
I savored your innocent body, drank your delightful breath 
You were divinely appetizing, you trembled under my body 
Your sighs made me so powerful that I didn't want to stop
Oh my God, Those 30 little minutes are the best event of sad life

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  1. Date: 7/31/2011 5:18:00 PM
  1. Date: 5/27/2011 6:29:00 AM
    awsome my friend keep it up 30 munite

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 9:50:00 PM
    NICE work! I thought it was supposed to only last THREE minutes! Maybe this is why I can't keep a woman??? I need to get my ears checked! ~JSLambert

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 7:16:00 PM
    Not bad my friend keep up the good work "15 min"

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 4:55:00 AM
    Nice recollection though sad, the memories of those 30 minutes, Gregory

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 4:37:00 AM
    Loss is such a painful experience. Sadness, pain, insecurity. And one day we look back and see that we have healed and moved on. Very nice write.

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 7:39:00 PM
    Borderline PG poem. :) Very passionate write u penned. Hope those 30 minutes do end up being a lifetime. Gwendolen