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30 Minutes

*****30 minutes***** When I see or feel something sad I hear the sound of your steps When you were moving away from me After those 30 sweet emotional minutes That we spent by playing in the paradise of love How can I forget those 30 minutes Which change the vision of my heart How can I erase your picture from my head Next to those princesses who deserve my love My heart is locked behind bars in your jail Oh, in my bedroom, I feel so good as sad The magic of those sacred 30 minutes happened there I savored your innocent body, drank your delightful breath You were divinely appetizing, you trembled under my body Your sighs made me so powerful that I didn't want to stop Oh my God, Those 30 little minutes are the best event of sad life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/31/2011 5:18:00 PM
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Date: 5/27/2011 6:29:00 AM
awsome my friend keep it up 30 munite
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:50:00 PM
NICE work! I thought it was supposed to only last THREE minutes! Maybe this is why I can't keep a woman??? I need to get my ears checked! ~JSLambert
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Date: 5/20/2011 7:16:00 PM
Not bad my friend keep up the good work "15 min"
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:55:00 AM
Nice recollection though sad, the memories of those 30 minutes, Gregory
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:37:00 AM
Loss is such a painful experience. Sadness, pain, insecurity. And one day we look back and see that we have healed and moved on. Very nice write.
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Date: 5/14/2011 7:39:00 PM
Borderline PG poem. :) Very passionate write u penned. Hope those 30 minutes do end up being a lifetime. Gwendolen
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