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3:00pm Departure

Formations fly, two vees silhouetted 
against a leaden sky, winging their way
to warmer climes, according to flight plan
scheduled by nature, primal instinct, geese
programmed, heed the call when leaves turn then fall.

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  1. Date: 10/16/2010 10:33:00 AM
    Excellent poetry to be reading this Saturday Carol. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 4:14:00 PM
    Just like clockwork with those birds, carol. I enjoyed the imagery here. Now THAT is good title choosing, like you did it here!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:49:00 PM
    Very creative and gripping write, carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 11:07:00 AM
    A remarkablle qautrain, a real delight, carol nette