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2 Haiku and a Senryu

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2 Haiku and a Senryu

Oh Great Mystery
Let me not forget myself
within my own prayers


Warm sun hits my face
hyacinth fragrant breezes
peonies dancing


Dancing Peonies
pink and purple faces sway
winking gracefully

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  1. Date: 10/12/2009 5:02:00 AM
    Beautiful work, Trudy! Your imagery is lovely and I really like how you set this up and the creative title, too. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 4:40:00 PM
    lovely scene! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 4:31:00 PM
    wonderful, i like the way you puy it together

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 1:39:00 PM
    Kool write Trudy, a most enjoyable read - go girl >> James,x

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 12:58:00 PM
    A brilliant combination of both forms, Trudy! What lovely images you offer to readers. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 10:55:00 AM
    These are wonderful Trudy! Just beautiful and I especially love the first one. Looking forward to reading more of your art! Hugs, Izzy

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 9:27:00 AM
    Trudy, these are truly beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 8:42:00 AM
    Oh so beautiful. Love the first three lines. Thanks for sharing, smile. Love Light Truth Patty

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 8:22:00 AM
    Such colorful and gentle writing! Nicely done, Trudy! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 6:33:00 AM
    Good write here friend....2 Haikus and a Senryu....I have a similar write "Random Thoughts 22 Double Haiku to Double Senryu" You should check it out.......:JP]

  1. Date: 10/5/2009 1:15:00 AM
    Beautiful work Trudy, Great senryu and awesome haikus...Raul

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 11:13:00 PM
    Love the first Haiku. Sometimes in life we get so busy that we forget ourselves. Love the descriptiveness. Keep writing. Sara