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2 Days Can Kill Me

It's the feeling of losing a limb And the space between time Till it returns again For the missing of the chime Thats usually in your heart Like the escaping dove Your missing part, The one you love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/29/2008 6:59:00 PM
I LOVE IT!!!! Its so sad and emotional. .
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:39:00 PM
Nice poem and great use of imaegry...Raul
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:24:00 PM
This one has me smiling. My nursing diagnosis is that the narrator lives. You may want to change loseing to losing in the first line. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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