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2 Contemporary 4traditional Churches

I entered Church “Ignited” once Music caused my bones to dance Although repeating choruses Reminded me of old chants Same music just went on and on Beat was driven deep, through air All Shouting, falling out was shown Applause was the crowds prayer Suddenly, the Crowd began to.. Run around the pews and scream Forming large circles,two by two Begging help to form the ring Preacher slaps a womans forehead Causing her to fall, and land I retreated toward the door Having seen all I could stand Sandra Hudson 1/20/2012 Joe Maverick's Contemporary Contest

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Date: 5/1/2012 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest Sandra. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2012 3:02:00 PM
Wow..bible bangers and born again tracers! I always wanted to see this! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:06:00 PM
Many forms of worship have come and gone, that's one reason i prefer the traditional as well. Great portrayal.
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:27:00 PM
Smile ˜ One Thing I Remind Myself & Have Mentioned Unto Others In Regards Unto Both Life & Church My Dear ˜ In My Spirit I Tell * My Beautiful Heavenly Father * "Its Just You & Me Right Now" ˜ Love, John!:) ˜
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