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2 Contemporary 4Traditional Churches

               I entered Church “Ignited” once
	Music caused my bones to dance
	Although repeating choruses
	Reminded me of old chants

	Same music just went on and on
	Beat was driven deep, through air
	All Shouting, falling out was shown
	Applause was the crowds prayer

	Suddenly, the Crowd began to..
	Run around the pews and scream 
	Forming large circles,two by two
	Begging help to form the ring

	Preacher slaps a womans forehead
	Causing her to fall, and land 
	I retreated toward the door
	Having seen all I could stand

	Sandra Hudson 1/20/2012
	Joe Maverick's Contemporary Contest

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  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest Sandra. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 3:02:00 PM bangers and born again tracers! I always wanted to see this! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Many forms of worship have come and gone, that's one reason i prefer the traditional as well. Great portrayal.

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Smile ˜ One Thing I Remind Myself & Have Mentioned Unto Others In Regards Unto Both Life & Church My Dear ˜ In My Spirit I Tell * My Beautiful Heavenly Father * "Its Just You & Me Right Now" ˜ Love, John!:) ˜