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1948 ~ 1983

. Screaming spirit birthed in a capsule of tainted flesh Silent soma now rests where those who sleep never rise .

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 5:14:00 PM

Good fascinating writing here.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/10/2010 9:08:00 AM

So much said in these few words, Abe! Keep your pen flowing!...Thanks for your comment and have a good time...Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 2/9/2010 8:42:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Date: 2/8/2010 6:32:00 PM

Good use of alliteration! Much between the lines here for the reader to think about. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/8/2010 4:24:00 PM

Good poem indeed,I can read between the lines..excellent..Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/8/2010 4:07:00 PM

I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Abe. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2010 3:58:00 PM

Interesting Imagism. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Sue Mason

Date: 2/8/2010 3:57:00 PM

Uncanny how first line fits my 1943 birth to an alcoholic capsule .. smile ... and, as for the second it seems that the older I get the more people are sleeping that dirt nap ... poignant writing here, Abe !!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/8/2010 3:48:00 PM

nicely penned, enjoyed reading@@

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/8/2010 3:37:00 PM

Good poem, I can only imaging how that middle line panned out...Raul