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Below is the poem entitled 1111 which was written by poet Edwin Baldwin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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time floats by sailing on a stream 
taking with it my one and only dream 
i feel so weak when once i was so strong 
thought i was right but i was so wrong 

i know the pain was killing you 
didn’t you trust me enough to 
think i could make it through 
nothing on earth i wouldn’t do 

even though i know you are gone 
all those memories keep hanging on 
it still feels like you're here with me 
i miss your touch so desperately 

i don’t think i can make it another day 
i'm just no good continuing on this way 
i can barely see the man i used to be 
blinded by all the pain and misery 

never thought i'd be standing on my own 
feeling so lost and all alone 
wishing that you were near 
to whisper these sweet words into your ear 

i miss feeling your heart beat next to mine my dear 
i wish that I had found a way to quiet all your fear 
i know it's more then me feeling sorry for myself 
all my dreams of loving ''You'' have been put on a shelf

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  1. Date: 2/18/2012 10:17:00 PM
    I like this but like your punctuated ones better heehee. Let me go see one more.