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#01 (sleep and dream)

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#01 (sleep and dream)

i go and sit on the curb
outside of my house
i stare at the stars
and down another beer

the world passes by
its enough to bring you down
everything weighs heavy on me
as i down another beer

moths flit around my head
as i contemplate life
going nowhere
so i down another beer

the earth spins beneath my feet
i stagger back inside
hunched beside the toilet
ive downed too many beers

sleep and dream
dream and sleep
awake once more and nothings changed
time to hit the beers once more

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  1. Date: 7/11/2010 9:39:00 PM
    lol,, i read the second one first,,,i though your #2 was the number you are behind me Daniel... kidding kidding.. but you are #1... smiles...i,, at chris,,,heheheh

  1. Date: 7/11/2010 7:34:00 PM
    Well, you really burst my bubble with Venus not having any moons. Why not just pretend? The always 'concious' Daniel pointing out reality *Sigh* Ha ha! Hey, sounds like you are drinking too much beer! You want to try some of my moonshine instead?~Chris