You've Broken Me

you've broken me in ways I can't recount
unloved, uncherished, and unsought am I
the anguish of my soul I can't surmount
the pounding of my heart an echoed, "Why?"

You were possessed, you were obsessed with me
the sun would not go down till we had met
you claimed my eyes bewitched in fantasy
and dreams of me would leave you in a sweat

you said I was the best of women found
my beauty ravished sweetly every thought
no one like me above or on this ground
for such as I you had sincerely sought

the years unraveled and I lost my glow
no longer did my form desire ignite
the love of someone else you came to know
and so descended hope to endless night

you took away from me my fondest dreams
I came to feel much like some loathsome trash
my tears came not in droplets but in streams
as self esteem then crumbled with a crash

you did not love my soul, you did not see
my true identity, you did not love
and so I tried to be other than me
my eagle heart I veiled to be your dove

and though I try so hard, it is in vain
no word, no smile, no touch can love awake
I daily try to live with searing pain
my heart and soul for you I must forsake

you've broken me in ways I can't express
but life goes on and on, and I survive
now and again I long for love's caress
so that once more my heart can come alive

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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James Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Sad, but technically brilliant, loved it!
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Thank you, James. I do love writing in this form.
Ogundare Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 7:59 AM
sad, but a lovely expression Eileen...
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Thank you, Abosede. There is joy and sorrow in life. It all needs expression.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 10:41 PM
So sad but oh so well expressed!
Manassian Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Thank you, Richard. I'm glad you came by to read this piece. Blessings, friend.
Callus Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:11 PM
This is so very sad, Eileen. It is hard to keep a relationship going when there is only physical love involved. Then it becomes hard and painful to deal with rejection and cheating. But life goes on...is it then possible to find new love? Hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Paul. Yes, this is a sad write. Life goes on for many who live with rejection and neglect. Hugs to you.
Vaso Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 9:49 PM
This is so sweet, makes me wish I was doctor of broken hearts, so I could mend them all! :) Hugs!
Manassian Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:05 PM
I'm sure you would be a wonderful doctor of broken hearts, Arthur. You are always welcome here. Hugs
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Very clear expressive writing. I am sure will reach many and they will know they are not alone.
Manassian Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Thank you, Heidi. I hope that it does.
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