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Unrhymed tercets
Silver tangoing with the shadows of thought Light of a thousand stars sparkling winks One beauty of a light explodes before the eyes Batting lids fall as wings upon a vision swoop Taking the heart away into a realm filled with joy Inside airs in song sings within echo bounces Soulful dreams come alive faraway distant memories Landing squarely upon golden sandy beaches We walked as one into paradise's shore Freedom danced in the wild Atlantic waves On each ripple comes a reflection kiss moon dances Holding hands away from darkness sealed precious with love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/24/2016 11:02:00 PM
How beautiful it is to imagine such a dream coming true ....
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:53:00 PM
sorry ........... forgot rating :)))
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:51:00 PM
- Your candlelight and heart could light up all the dark with this beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:22:00 PM
Beautifully done...Charlie
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:20:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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