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You Will Exist

All I want is to 
paint my ideas in a color frenzy
of fruition and victory. 

But there are days when 
all I do is sigh for what 
is yet to exist.

I lose all consciousness 
of doubt in the light of 
what stirs these words. 
God inspires the hope in me 
to bring my shaky hands 
to the page. 

Soon you will exist,
and you will not exist 
alone.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 6/24/2021 2:06:00 PM

I cant help but to translate this poem as the very birth of a poem. Every poem has a pulse and simmers to skip robustly along the warm skin of your soul Laura. The conception of a poem burns to exist not alone but to share it's spirit in the mind of mortality's maturation. "All I want is to paint my ideas in a color frenzy of fruition and victory..." great poetic vim Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/3/2021 4:39:00 AM

Spot on Justin. I highly honor you and your beautiful wisdom - it shines brighter than anything I can put to a page. ~Laura