Wrongful Life Claim Against My Father

They filed his blood beneath a numbered case—
the marrow went to war without a call.
The VA counted cells, not what took place
in basements where his stare could split the wall.

The cancer knew his secrets—mutiny
against Guam’s humid silence, its red debt
claimed as the twenty-one guns thoomed in key.
We stood. We nodded. No one cried. Not yet.

There’s money now, for toxin’s wrongful death,
Agent Orange crusading through his bones.
But not for years of learning that a breath
is held—not for the legacy of tones.

They pay for what his blood became, not how
it taught us all to disappear. Lie down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 9/1/2025 8:13:00 AM
Depleted uranium, gulf war syndrome, it never ends. No way I was going to approve my son going into any of the services. They fracture individuals and all their relationships and it then takes years of fighting to get them to do anything.
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Date: 7/9/2025 5:45:00 AM
Is this a true account? Ugh! How awful. There's nothing about war that's good except it's ending. Then there's the damage
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 7/9/2025 8:19:00 AM
100% true and I agree. I mean I hated my father, but it was deeply unfair what happened to him and very, very easy to see how he got to be the kind of man he was. Thanks for commenting, Tom.
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