Written In Orchard

Those days (days of experience)!
I would travel some seventy miles a day, 
To accompany that golden woman as daily duty,
To that far countryside of Kellar.
Sometimes as dogs go mad in urge behind bi*tches 
In autumns and in springs,
And sometimes as  that Hindu god would see his deity beloved
By the stream-side.

My worried coughing father would warn me and advise
About women and the bitter realities of life
But, I would reply with an arrogant smile.

These apples of neighbors have grown tall and thick
Than ours!
And these dried, broken trees,
These newly planted baby plants,
Bring tears into my eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Aziz Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 12:26 PM
A great message through this poem. Feel free to comment on my poems!best wishes-shaista:)
Bhat Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Oh! You are welcome. I am from Kashmir. [email protected]
Thajudeen Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Last line fine,
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