Winter's Wind

hooves pounding the snow manes flying in Winter's wind ~ mustangs on the hills

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2024 11:07:00 AM

Great images!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/28/2024 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for your many reads and comments, Kim.

John Lawless

Date: 1/28/2024 7:20:00 AM

I can hear the muffled hoofbeats on the distant horizon....Beautifully done Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 1/28/2024 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for being able to imagine the scene. I would love to see it for real. Happy Sunday playoff games, John.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/27/2024 8:08:00 PM

A fantastic Haiku, Lin. Beautiful imagery.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/28/2024 4:27:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your thoughts, Jerry.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 4:27:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, Lin. I could easily see the mustangs running across the snow-covered hills, manes flying. A true Haiku, my friend. A FAV for my list. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 1/28/2024 4:26:00 AM

I'm delighted you saw the scene through my eyes. Thanks, Bill.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/27/2024 4:08:00 PM

Ahhh Lin, I love haikus and horses and therefore the perfect poem written by a great poet. - Blessing, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 1/27/2024 4:21:00 PM

Thanks for reading me and leaving such supportive remarks, Daniel. I appreciate you for both.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 3:06:00 PM

a breathtaking Haiku, Lin. I could hear the hooves and feel the chilly wind. Well done...hugs, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 1/27/2024 4:20:00 PM

Feeling the action of a poet's lines... that's a great compliment. Thank you, Sara.