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Winter Wind

Viciously, she draws a blade of steely cold across my throat, driving the warm breath from my lungs, leaving me gasping on the road; then, with a flip of frost glazed hair, she whirls around the brick-walled turn. Caught so in her freezing frenzy, I shudder, apprehensively pulling my woolen comfort close, knowing she is slinking even now back round the block to pounce again, prowling ice wolf, sharp fangs bared. A bullying beast all day long, she pushes nice people aside, but in the morning we shall wake to find her raging ceased; she has gone and quietly left a field of down about our feet. Copyright, August 29, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 9/3/2014 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations Faye. I love your way of writing and really love this poem.
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Date: 8/31/2014 12:58:00 PM
Amazing use of personification brings the biting winter wind to life, Faye. Sometimes the freezing wind does seem to take our breath away. And I appreciated the way you concluded the poem with the quiet gift of snow. I've been enjoying your poetry, Faye, and it's about time I make sure you are in my favorite poets list. Blessings to ta talented poet! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2014 6:16:00 AM
A beautifully-crafted poem.
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:46:00 AM
Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:00:00 PM
I had so many emotions brought out reading this I can only say WELL done.
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:23:00 PM
WOW Faye the imagery sent a shiver down my spine and I feel chilled to the bone! Great write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:21:00 PM
Wonderful piece....even in August it brings a chill to this reader. Well done
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