Winter Wind

Viciously, she draws a blade 
of steely cold across my throat,
driving the warm breath from my lungs,
leaving me gasping on the road;
then, with a flip of frost glazed hair,
she whirls around the brick-walled turn.

Caught so in her freezing frenzy, I shudder,
apprehensively pulling my woolen comfort close,
knowing she is slinking even now
back round the block to pounce again,
prowling ice wolf, sharp fangs bared.

A bullying beast all day long,
she pushes nice people aside,
but in the morning we shall wake
to find her raging ceased;
she has gone and quietly left
a field of down about our feet.

Copyright, August 29, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Congratulations Faye. I love your way of writing and really love this poem.
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Amazing use of personification brings the biting winter wind to life, Faye. Sometimes the freezing wind does seem to take our breath away. And I appreciated the way you concluded the poem with the quiet gift of snow. I've been enjoying your poetry, Faye, and it's about time I make sure you are in my favorite poets list. Blessings to ta talented poet! Love, Carolyn
Sibanda Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 6:16 AM
A beautifully-crafted poem.
H. Chouhdry Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 5:00 PM
I had so many emotions brought out reading this I can only say WELL done.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:23 PM
WOW Faye the imagery sent a shiver down my spine and I feel chilled to the bone! Great write:-) Hugs jan xxx
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Wonderful piece....even in August it brings a chill to this reader. Well done
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