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time to set you free watch you fly out on your own life’s waiting for you find your courage from within get out there and live your dreams AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on February 18, 2020 for contest LET THE PENS FLOW - TANKA sponsored by JENISH SOMADAS

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Date: 2/26/2020 3:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. We need to remember to fly from time to time. I love your last line, "get out there and live your dreams." If only everyone would. Enjoy your win.....
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:31:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Paula.
Date: 2/25/2020 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2020 6:32:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 2/25/2020 12:47:00 PM
- We all have to learn to fly ... lovely written, Line :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/25/2020 9:47:00 AM
Wonderful message to the young wings.. Great win Line..
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Date: 2/25/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/22/2020 10:28:00 PM
It is WAY past time! Do it now folks. You heard it right here!
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Date: 2/23/2020 3:06:00 AM
LOL I was thinking of our grandchild when I wrote this.
Date: 2/20/2020 2:41:00 AM
we nourish and nurture them and they spread their beautiful wings and fly- but they always return when they need a boost- lovely, Julie
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Date: 2/23/2020 3:06:00 AM
Lovely comment, Julie. Thank you.
Date: 2/19/2020 12:29:00 PM
This is the way I felt about my children leaving home though I miss them still. A lovely Tanka Line. I am sure it will do well. xxoo
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Date: 2/19/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Connie.
Date: 2/18/2020 7:09:00 PM
pretty, this could mean so many things... good write Line :) hugs
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Date: 2/18/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated. visit and comment, Sandra.
Date: 2/18/2020 6:17:00 PM
nicely said, line! sometimes easier said than done, though...
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:58:00 PM
Of course... LOL

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