wildflower

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contest-monoklitteration-sponsor- nette onclaud- 5/29/25

the sun's benevolent beauty blessed the meadow's new wildflower

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/20/2025 2:21:00 PM

what a beautiful scene you created with your monoku and its alliteration. Marvelous job! I agree, the sun is benevolent. I seem to crave it every day :-) yellow rose

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/7/2025 9:09:00 AM

Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, your poetic finesse shines in the beauty of your monoku, where alliteration is used with effective moderation. How wonderful to envision and feel the scene you've portrayed. Your imagery brings me to center of the sunny wildflower meadow where blessings abound... congratulations for your success in Nette's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/2/2025 8:35:00 AM

The sun does seem to bless those it touches huh? Really good Monoku! Xoxo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2025 8:05:00 AM

exactly what i needed---alliteration without same letters tangled together.. and what a lovely delivery...congrats on your top win as i thank you for supporting this spree, frederick!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/30/2025 5:35:00 AM

Perhaps a sonnet about a wildflower would be nice !

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/30/2025 5:34:00 AM

Thank God for the suns precious blessing, heh, love your line Frederic, though I miss your sonnets lol