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White Devil

White Devil Call it what you want! I call it, his favorite season hunt... Two hoofs imprinted near the riverfront. Echoes calling my soul with a loud, ferocious grunt. I smell it in the air, lost upon the white golden stair. A deep frost dwelling all over his lair. Tangled by the frozen grip of my hair. A decision, I declare to give what he won't spare. This man has no red suit.. Lurking in the white to recruit. A midnight suicide clouding me with pollute. I pause my tongue on mute, lost in a white castle chute. Headed straight into a shivering blazing star path. The land of snow covered like a bubble bath. Breaking icicles like crystal glass, suck3d by the milky-way mass. Multiplying bruises like a cascade, enjoying the aftermath. Finding a way to slit the pain in my domain. I grab a coat and lace my name to Mary-Jane. Inserting the finest line to ease the drain in my brain. I drink the icy scotch, and drop a silver nickel into the devils cocaine. Fallen in to his bait, its too late, I got 7 lines on my dinner plate. I'm covered up in snow, enjoying the amazing way to suffocate. Eight beats to every minute is my new heart rate. I'm reaching for the white golden gate, where the white devil waits. Drowning like liquor in a frappe mixing the winter's high tide. Death to my soul is where I hide under this white blanket neutral side. Too heavy to uplift this storm lost in the devil's cold custard suicide guide. Waking up in a coma, in a world where white collides with the rage of suicide. by;p.d. (( Trapped in a snowy blizzard))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2016 11:17:00 PM
can't help it, this is my fav. reminds me of a white drug
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:16:00 PM
sounds cold **SKAT**
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:09:00 PM
epic poem two. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/11/2013 11:54:00 PM
Linda, This is a very clever and intriguing write. The imagery you use allows the reader into your "trapped" world of snow. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 11/13/2012 2:04:00 PM
pd, I got confused. I forgot your contest was called femme fatale and I was looking under the words Pink. I am late for an appt. and am not home so I can't post my poem for your contest until tonight. thanks for answering me.LUv, andrea
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Date: 8/17/2011 10:37:00 AM
Dang this is some tough stuff here! I was entranced from begining to end. From the first stanza to the last, I wanted more to read. Some blizzard!
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Date: 6/21/2011 2:21:00 AM
Drab but convincing! Don't you think that this is a bite of an extreem. But relax, your fate doth awaite you! Interesting write-up! Keep the write-up, Up! Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS and by the way... I used you in my contest poem(AT THE CONVENTION) SEE POEEM POSTED TODAY1 Hope you don't mind......
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:28:00 PM
Wonderful job with this P.D. R.M.
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:35:00 AM
What an "impressive" and "enthralling" write~~
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:02:00 AM
Hi Destroyer! You gotta know, I had found this name somewhat intimidating...I think I do a fine enough job, on my own with poetical self-destruction? :) I greatly enjoyed this piece, though I know how awful it is being "trapped in a snowy blizzard". Thank you for sharing! Best to you, Mikki
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:02:00 AM
Happy New Year!!!
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Date: 12/31/2010 4:06:00 PM
this was a very deep poem you could feel the emotion in every line
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:43:00 PM
Yep! We're having a devil of a winter here in Michigan. We've just taken in four kittens who had developed nasal and lung problems. They're doing fine now, but we can't find it in our hearts to turn them out into the cold again. Enjoyed this wild opus. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/28/2010 10:26:00 AM
MAN THIS WAS REAL NICE AND WELL PUT TOGETHER
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Date: 12/28/2010 9:58:00 AM
first a "white devil" then a red angel--way to go with your thoughts, pd-- and thank you for dropping by my Christmas blog :) happy to see you there :) now I have to think of an entry for your contest...
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:16:00 PM
typical of me i'm a week late in seeing this very very profound poem, such imagery, all devils are white, no wonder they get away with so much. Harry
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Date: 12/26/2010 4:36:00 PM
This poem was very deep and emotional. It really explains a lot to me. Loved it!
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Date: 12/26/2010 2:09:00 PM
good great grand...stay away from that devil water and demon dust
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:28:00 AM
my christmas was okey(: how about yours? & i think you will always find a way to get back up from tipping over, whether it be now or later, it just seems to be your nature P.D. and yeah, i've been gone a while.but i think im back! ~Always&Forever
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:10:00 AM
freezing yourself in the depths of white snow. waiting for the 'white devil' to come and take you away, i've never heard a devil being that color, but it seems they would be the most scary to be trapped in, since its a snowy blizzard. at least being burried in the snow keeps you warm before your last breath. interesting write. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/26/2010 9:46:00 AM
Kinda kreepy' audree
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:48:00 PM
well at least the blizzard has not frozen your ability for words,P D i am very tired of snow by now, so i won't say any more about it, enjoy the rest of the holidays.
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:37:00 PM
whiteness of a storm can be devastatinig especially alone,,it can also be so beautiful if you are not stuck,,,, if you just look into the whiteness it can be cleansing and dreamlike,,Thank You for holding a the contest and for my placement within,,,i know some were upset about the concept and maybe rightfully so,,but if we all quit writing about anything because it will upset someone,then there would be nothing to write about,,Thank you for all your visits,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 12/25/2010 7:05:00 PM
Hey! I'm so freaking mad right now p.d. I can't believe the nerve of some poets. Jealousy;-( I didn't know running a contest here was such a big deal. I'm just very mad :-/ responding to rude mail. Merry Christmas see you 2morrow ;-) Love ROYAL =(^.^)=
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Date: 12/25/2010 3:43:00 PM
Wonderful write here P.D. I understand completely where you are coming from as I too have been stranded in the snow.....between the freezing temps and blizzard conditions can make you feel all sorts of emotions. Thanks so much for sharing! Hope your Christmas was a wonderful day and wishing you a joyous New Year! God Bless~Mary~
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