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Written: September 18, 2023 Unwritten Absence Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Ink Empress ______________________________________________________________ In the absence of ink—in a nexus of poetic dreams, Anathematized by disconsolate on nebulous beams, Whispers of unwritten absence, inveigled by fate, Decry solace in a niche, a motley bosom to conflate With a knavish grin, inveigled by unwritten absence, Lines to untangle as I wander in a realm of silence, Kaleidoscope hues of grace—nebulous and bright, Poet hands waltz—souls aquiver crave for delight. Through fatuous thoughts and maundering dreams, Desultory, odious maxims, akin to gossamer streams In the ferret of eudaemonia—an empyreal bliss, Yearning for an aphonic clangor, an analgesic balm, a kiss. Amidst the quiet path of the mind's arcane domain, Appendence of fatuous motives lets stoicism wane. Asunder, the shrunken views of nonoccurrence fade, Leaving behind a peacefulness, an anencephalic shade Bedraggled daydreamer, beleaguered by strife, Search for balmy zeal—in the realm of life. With any vicissitude exodus, a lackluster goodbye, Caterwauling climbs on cosmic casts, cutting cry Abjured animus, aphonic ataxia astray at the abyss, A flash of fountainhead in a fog of freshness to fix. Aching for a quiet mind, In the realm of tacit verse, Where anencephalic thoughts and reality rehearse, With fragmented twigs and weathered trees, Dusks dovetail dead, desert dented, and deals. Through dusk and the chalice of wicked despair, Seeking solace in woodlands—with a grim air In an oasis of burly boldness and spunky defiance, I paint my dreams with plum verses, a poetic alliance, Louring the lines betwixt what's illicit and true, Creating dreamscapes—that only I can pursue In whispers of unwritten absence, unspoken folklore, Where precedent is defied—dreams can soar. With each brushstroke, word, and paint-splattered leaf, I capitalize on the power of dreams, banishing grief. The omission of inquiry—and the stake of hope I pioneer an apogamic peep, phantasms elope, Where the unsent and unspoken find their voice, And the sanguine beats of dreamscapes rejoice. Weave tales of love and loss—where gloom prevails, Forbidden orchards and barren moss, soul unveils, With unwritten absences and fragmented lines, Empower words where beauty flocks intertwine.

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Date: 9/29/2023 3:32:00 AM
Your opening lines stood out for me as always dear Sotto, such a well crafted and well articulated write with brilliant alliterations and flow of rhymes! I love how you’ve written “ weave tales of love and loss “ “ forbidden orchards” “ plum verses” “ sanguine beats of dreamscapes” youv really paid attention to what i as a reader would appreciate. Thoughtful and meaingful take thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning .
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Date: 9/21/2023 9:24:00 AM
Such amazing words and phrases, your poetry has now surpassed my humble comprehension. You have now aspired into a realm of superb verse that has bypassed my limited vocabulary, However I am sure the meaning is wonderful dear friend, although it escapes me..
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Date: 9/20/2023 7:38:00 AM
I have to say, that this is one of my most favourites from you ever!! Gosh, the way you've painted surreal imageries with your artistic wordsmithery and described the essence of 'unwritten absence' in your own unique way, whilst conveyed so many palpable emotions.. Ah, I'm mesmerised.. There are so many lines that left me flabbergasted here "In the ferret of eudaemonia—an empyreal bliss", "With each brushstroke, word, and paint-splattered leaf" And many more! A phenomenal masterpiece :) BOL!!
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Date: 9/19/2023 11:50:00 AM
Your thrilling poem is a poetic masterpiece, my friend. I enjoyed the entire presentation. I hope your day is blessed. :)
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Date: 9/19/2023 11:27:00 AM
Fabulous poem of elaborate linguistic mastery.
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Date: 9/19/2023 8:14:00 AM
Your intricate language and intertwined words made for a marvelous read. I loved 'Kaleidoscope hues of grace—nebulous and bright..." The line grabbed my at my soul. You're right, the music is astonishing...a perfect match for your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2023 6:53:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this very descriptive and expressive one with us. The use of elaborate language is different than most. Your visits to my pages are always uplifting. Sara
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Date: 9/19/2023 5:54:00 AM
Your whispers of unwritten absence resonate throughout this poem my friend. Your word-artistry shines in your poetic prowess, Lasaad. You are a reservoir of poetic talent.
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:15:00 AM
Your poem is ten degrees excellent above the first batch of good poets. Your vocabulary is invincible. Your argument is so much to the point. Very well done. Deserves high praise.
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