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Whispers Of The Woods

In quiet woods where whispers play, The trees converse in rustling leaves; As sunlight dances through the grey. In quiet woods where whispers play, Of seasons shifting, night to day, The gentle breeze brings calm that cleaves, In quiet woods where whispers play, The trees converse in rustling leaves. In quiet woods where whispers play, As sunlight dances through the grey, Of seasons shifting, night to day, The gentle breeze brings calm that cleaves. The trees converse in rustling leaves, And finds their peace in what nature weaves.

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Date: 10/29/2024 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations, Lauren! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done. You were successful against a field of talented poets, my friend Emile.
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Lauren Tilley
Date: 10/29/2024 3:44:00 PM
Thank you very much! I have never written in this form before and was challenging to do, that fact that I placed I’m shocked so thank you again
Date: 10/29/2024 7:27:00 AM
You've written an excellent Trionet, Lauren. A great example of seasonal poetry.
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Lauren Tilley
Date: 10/29/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much! I’ve never written one before so was a good challenge and really appreciate the feedback

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